Originally posted on: 13th February 2014
We have a bit of translation problem here.
It's all about an abbreviation. The thing is, first letters of words in the phrase "Dorian and Sybil" equals "Das".
However, as this fic was originally written in Polish, I did a trick which I'm not able to repeat here.
You see, in Polish, the letter "i" means "and".
So, "Dorian and Sybil" is in Polish - "Dorian i Sybil".
And ... "Dorian i Sybil" equals "Dis"! The name of Fili and Kili's mother! I discovered it long after naming my characters and it was pretty funny. So I took advantage of it. But I have no idea how to solve the problem in English. So I let it be. "Dis" stays. You've been warned.
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Thorin was fighting fiercely with a
sleep embracing him.
He had decided that he would find out
what his nephews were up to this time, at all costs.
Since the Company had set out from
Rivendell, these two had been volunteering to take a watch every night.
This was not normal for them.
Moreover, he couldn't squeeze out
of them anything about the two young people for all the world.
Minutes were dragging on
mercilessly, and there was only calm silence all around him.
Thorin almost gave up, he
practically fell asleep when he heard Kili’s whisper.
“Do you think that everyone’s
asleep?”
“I have no idea. I pray to AulĂ« for
that,” Fili answered.
Something new! Fili prayed!
What Thorin heard in the next
moment, utterly surprised him.
An arrow buried in the ground
somewhere nearby.
“Finally!” Kili sighed.
Thorin heard one of the dwarves
getting up and going in the direction of the arrow. Then, he came back. Thorin
could hear the rustle of parchment, and a moment later there was a quiet
laughter.
“What? What did they say?” Fili
whispered impatiently.
“Read it yourself,” his younger
brother giggled.
How much it costed Thorin to pretend
to be asleep!
After a short time Fili chuckled
softly.
“Where do you have a pen and ink?”
he asked.
There was the sound of digging in a
backpack.
“Great. Now, what will we write
back?” the older of the brothers questioned.
“Hmm ... Maybe ... They won’t win
this battle, and if they still insist, they'll have to deal with us...”
“Good,” Fili muttered and
Thorin could hear the sound of writing on parchment.
“Well, and everything as usual;
that we all are doing well, we miss them, we need to meet as soon as
possible ...”
“Yes, yes ... Oh, we have to add
that tomorrow we won’t contact them.”
“Surely,” Kili agreed. “Let
me write the ending,” he added.
“Okay,” Fili said reluctantly.
“Menu gamut khed, Dis,” the
younger dwarf whispered, likely writing what he was saying.
You are a
wonderful person, Dis? What was this, for the love of Mahal?
Thorin was dying of curiosity ... On the other hand, he didn't want his nephews
to discover that he is not sleeping. He felt like a spy.
A bowstring twanged.
“I think it landed where it should ..." Kili murmured, then he yawned.
“Our watch is over,” Fili stated.
“Yeah, it's time to wake up Ori and
Nori.”
Before Thorin had fallen asleep, he
thought that from now on his sister-sons cannot wriggle out of explanations.
***
Menu gamut khed,
DiS.
Dorian smiled. They always wrote this at the end.
It was pretty funny-"Dorian
and Sybil" equaled "DiS", just like Fili and Kili’s mother’s name.
Menu tessu, Fili. Menu tessu, Kili.
He and Sybil always end their
message like that.
You are
everything, Fili. You are everything, Kili.
It had been Sybil who had come up with
the idea of flying letters.
As they had been saying their
goodbies to their dwarven brothers, before they had left Imladris, they had
explained to them their new way of communication. When it was certain that Fili
and Kili had a watch, the dwarves would get an arrow with the message. They would read it
and write off on the other side of the parchment, then shoot it away in the
direction as consistent as possible with that the arrow had flown from.
This idea was quite risky. The
arrow may have missed its mark among a stone passages. Or hit it too well in the
darkness. In addition, it was wrapped in the parchment and that decreased its flight
quality. However, flying letters had been working so far. They were much more
convenient than the weekly meetings. Moreover, they were using sort of code in their communication. If someone undesirable read the note, they wouldn't understand a lot. This form of communication, unfortunately, was not sufficient
to satisfy the longing. Not after what they had gone through in Rivendell.
Dorian saddened. He reminded
himself as he and his sister had departed thence. A lot of friends had come to say goodbye
to them - Ireth, Lindir, Arien, Fingwid, Merenwen, Nessa, Dinendal, Culnamo ...
and many others. Even Lord Elrond.
“Farewell, Dorian. Farewell,
Sybil,” he had said. “Make your choices carefully - that is only advice I give you. Now go, and let the blessing of all the elves accompany you. May the stars
enlighten you from the sky above!”
Looking at The Last Homely House,
shining with shimmering lights among the night falling down at the world,
Dorian had wondered what was so special about he and his sister. Elrond hadn't been the first powerful ruler who favored them greatly.
Or maybe all the elves were like
that?
They had been given a large stocks
of food not bothering in the backpacks, warm clothes and blankets,
waterproof capes, equipment for climbing the mountains and lots of some good
advice. In addition, they had been gifted with a one, beautiful dagger for
each of them. Sybil also got a quiver full of excellent arrows, and Dorian got
an magnificent steath for his sword.
They would never be able to repay
it.
He glanced at his sister. She sat
hunched, staring into the darkness with unseeing eyes. She missed him, the most
likely. Dorian didn't want to interfere in what had happened between her and
Fili on the shortest night of the year. He only guessed that it had been something
serious. They had kissed for goodbye.
In the next morning, they set out
to be the shadows once again. They did not speak much. They were focused on not getting too close to the Company and on looking out for any signs of orcs
and goblins presence. There had been no one so far. Only the wind howled
between the rocks ruthlessly. As the storm began to rage, traveling had become
very difficult. However, as of course it always can be worse, a battle of stone
giants unleashed. Hell seemed to have no end.
When they thought that soon, the
whole world would crash on their heads or they would fall into the abyss,
everything stopped.
But there was no reason to be
happy.
In their madness, the stone giants had
collapsed the way that dwarves had paced, with huge boulders. Dorian and Sybil
were seemingly barred away from the Company for good.
The hopelessness reached them. All
day, they had been wandering around, trying to get through this shambles. In the
end, they gave up, and sat on the ground. As the tears began to gather in their eyes,
they heard screams of orcs.
Something hit Dorian in the back of
his head. He fell into the darkness and didn't remember anything else.
***
The whip lashed her back. She
felt the hot blood flowing over it.
“Move, traitor!”
‘If you were tied to the warg and
had to keep up on foot, you would die a long time ago,’ she thought, but she
didn't dare to say it out loud.
She stumbled and fell. The whip
hit her before she had had a chance to get up.
“Watch where you're going!”
'No.' She could not look. She could
not open her eyes. If so, she would see Dorian, unconscious, flipped over
the saddle of the warg, as if the boy were a hunted deer.
The sight caused her an indescribable
pain. She could not bear it.
They knew that very well.
She was struck with the whip for
the third time.
“Azog!” Gorbag yelled. “This wench
drags on too much! Those traitors only slow us down! Why don’t you kill them
right away?!”
Pale Orc rode up on his White Warg
to Gorbag, who was mounting the black beast. Sybil was pulled by her dun warg.
Immediately, the creature began to whine and cower. It was always doing it when it was near the White Warg.
“You know why they are still
alive,” Azog said. "Killing them would be only a grace. It’s your responsibility
to make them not to slow us down. But if they did, YOU will regret that.”
Azog wanted to leave, but the White
Warg had stopped listening to commands. Instead, it stared at Sybil hard,
growling. Pale Orc slipped from the saddle. He stroked his beast on the head,
and then looked at the girl with a devilish grin.
“My friend is clearly fond of you,
traitor.”
She almost snorted. 'Friend!' she
thought. 'That should be nominated as the joke of the year!'
She stared straight into the eyes
of the albino warg. Why was she not afraid? Though it was insane. She was
filled only with hatred and disgust.
“But I’m not fond of him,” she
replied.
“HOW DARE YOU SPEAK TO ME LIKE
THAT!” Azog roared, and threw her into the air with a swat of his hand. She fell
three meters away with a loud bang. The rope did not prevented for more.
‘That hurt,’ she thought, but did
not even moan. She wouldn't give him the satisfaction.
White Warg had jumped up and
snapped its jaws, trying to catch her. When it failed, it attacked his dun serf
in anger, biting it in the leg. The haggard warg hadn;t even defended, and began to run instead. Dorian fell from the saddle, and Sybil was dragged along the
ground for a few yards. Pale Orc mounted his "friend" and drove to
the front of the column. Gorbag urged the miserable warg to go back to the
rest, and Sybil ran with him. She started heading towards Dorian, the boy lying
limply. To her surprise, dun beast did the same.
She took a brother in her arms with
a great effort.
‘When he has become so heavy?’
“Sybil?” he groaned.
“Ssh ... they captured us.”
“Again?”
“Pretend that you're unconscious,”
she whispered and flipped him over the saddle.
She looked at the beast which
she was fated to. Smaller than the others, bony, with a thin fur and as if milder.
It seemed that the rest were bulling him.
‘Weakling,’ She thought. 'Yes, I'll
call you Weakling.'
She tried very hard to keep up pace
with Weakling, the beast continuously running. The rest of the wargs gang were
moving very quickly and nimbly. They were rushing through the hard stone
pathways restlessly.
“Faster, traitor!” Gorbag roared
as she toppled for the uncounted time.
“So let me ride a warg, damn it!”
She replied. “I can walk more slowly, you know? I can resist with all the
strength of my arms and legs ... I can slow us down soooo much. Guess what Azog
would do then ...”
She got another stroke with the
whip, this time it had hit her shoulder.
“Fine,” he snapped. “You will mount
that misery which your cowardly brother hangs over. And if you tried any
tricks, guess where I would have the orders ...”
“Yeah,” she grumbled. “Deal”.
She sat semiconscious Dorian in
front of her, while Gorbag tied Weakling to his warg. When he mounted the
black beast, the whip lashed girl’s back.
“You love it, don’t you?” she
hissed, writhing in pain.
“Shut up and move,” he answered.
Riding Weakling was a nightmare.
Sybil constantly feared that Dorian would slip out of the saddle. He sat before her, his head tottering, and he was mumbling something under his breath from time to time.
But the worst was what everyone
else was saying. That the traitors were still alive.
Still.
***
“Bring the traitors,” he ordered.
He did not have to wait long. After
a while they were kneeling in front of him, gagged, with tied arms and legs. The
boy looked pathetically - perhaps he had been hit in the head too hard. He was
looking around with the half-conscious, confused eyes. He would probably faint
if his lads weren't treated him with the liquor.
But this girl ... she was driving
him mad. EVERYONE whom Azog directed his gaze at were scared to death. She wasn't. She glared at him with anger and disdain. When he had seen her, he immediately had wanted to cut her head off. He had barely stopped himself.
He would play with this traitor. As
Oakenshield and his nephews would be finished off, he was going to kill her
brother very slowly and painfully, and force her to look at all of it. And when
the would boy be dead, Azog would torture the girl. He would make her love him and
hate him. Desire him and be afraid of him. She would be under his control until the
end her miserable life.
He was savoring that vision for a
moment, and then he spoke.
.
“I’m sure you wonder, traitors, why
I didn’t kill you right away. Well, a thirst of murder overwhelms me at your
very sight. But ... there’s something that would be more cruel than killing
you ... I received a message from the Great Goblin ... he captured Oakenshield
and twelve other dwarves. He’d like to provide me the leader's head for the appropriate
payment. But I thought to myself then, that I had to see the death of this
stinking heir of Durin on my own eyes. And suddenly, you two showed up. And
since then I have a dilemma - you will die on his eyes, after he finds out how
much you have done for him, or should it be Oakenshield who loses a head
first, and you will be able only to watch ...”
He burst out laughing at the sight
of traitors’ expressions and felt pure pleasure at the sound of their cry of
despair.
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Kuzdul:
Menu gamut khed - you are a
wonderful person.
Menu tessu - you are everything.
We have Gorbag here, the same who
we know from The
Lord of the Rings.
Because I thought... why not?
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